spooky scary scarecrow...
- Lewis
- Mar 16, 2021
- 1 min read
me and my friend were playing in the woods and we came across a cave.
we went inside and there were loads of pictures painted on the walls of the
old cave, and it was of gang warfare and terrorism, but with scarecrows. we went back to the gardens to tell the adults, but when we got there was no one, we turned around and there stood
the old scarecrow. the adults were laying there stone cold, they were knocked out,
and the scarecrow was staring at us with red fiery eyes just like from the paintings in the cave...
quite scary scarecrow.
Kia ora from New Zealand.
Lewis it is great to see you having a go at the 100 Word Challenge, and that is the key element of this = 100 Words! Do you know that you have 103?
You have some really good ideas but I think it is a shame that you have not punctuated your piece, especially with capital letters. This would make your story so much better, so that is definitely a goal for next time.
Ms M #100WC